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Resume Review

Veteran

Kevin Burch Grantsville, UT

I have prepared my resume and was wondering if I could have help in reviewing it. I need help in translating military experience to the corporate world. I know it is heavy in military logistical but feel that falls short from what the corporate wants to ser in a resume. Also would like help in writing my cover based off the resume.

3 January 2013 11 replies Resumes & Cover Letters

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Veteran

Ryan Monroe Clarksville, TN

I hate to piggyback on your post CPT Burch, but if anybody would be willing to review mine as well I would be truly thankful. I'm in Afghanistan right now and really need to hit the job search right when I get home, but I really won't have much time to attend the workshops offered by ACAP as I ETS pretty quickly after I return.

Thanks to anybody willing to help!

27 January 2013 Helpful answer

Advisor

Bill Craig Madison, VA

Kevin or Ryan,

If you still need a review, please send me your resume - whgcraig@gmail.com. I was a hiring manager and consulting team leader at 2 IT companies.

Bill Craig

Veteran

Dr. David Serana MD, Ed.D., MSN, BSSE, BSN, RN-BC, US Army Iraq War Veteran Bethpage, NY

contact www.hireheroesusa.org because they help polishing resumes to its best.

Advisor

Richard Buck Patterson, NY

Good evening. My name is Richard Buck, a Marine Corp vet. If you still need someone to review your resume, I would be happy to review it and help you.

Richard Buck
76warrior85@gmail.com
914 391 3375

Advisor

Billy Kline Marietta, GA

Ryan,

Thanks for your service as well. It would be an honor to look over your resume. I was a hiring manager in four different companies and a small business owner prior to my current role.

What fields and/or jobs interest you? My professional background is in Information Technology but I have resources in other fields as well. My wife would also be honored to help. She was a hiring manager and executive recruiter earlier in her career.

Please email your resume and career aspirations to billy_kline@hotmail.com.

Best regards,

-Billy

Advisor

Susan Carr Plainwell, MI

Kevin,

It looks as though you have quite a few folks who have offered to review your resume. I am also retired Navy and in the civilian sector have been a hiring manager, so I have a pretty good handle on what a good cover letter looks like. I wouldn't mind giving you some pointers on that. You can email me at susan.carr@ge.com.

Regards,
Sue

Advisor

Ann Summers Waldorf, MD

Kevin...I'm retired Navy so I might not be up on all kinds of Army terminology. But I'm willing to review your resume. Send it to me at: ann.summers@hp.com . ...Ann

Advisor

Drew Mitchell Carmel, IN

Kevin,
As you can see in the responses above, we can all help you for free. I've assisted numerous college graduates and MBA candidates write their resumes and coach them for upcoming interviews.
I can share with you many sample resumes/CVs that you can use to create your ultimate résumé.
Please let me know how I can help!
Kind Regards, Drew Mitchell

Advisor

Harry Rakfeldt Belfair, WA

Kevin,

We exchanged comments some months ago. I would also be happy to look at your resume (one former 'hat' was in human resources for a lodging chain).

Harry
hrakfeldt@gmail.com

Veteran

Ray Martinelli Flanders, NJ

Kevin,

As a Logistician and fellow Veteran, I would be honored to review your resume. I had been in a similar mindset when I transitioned out of the Marine Corps: dont sell your skills and experience short...they are highly desired in the civilian workforce.

Best Regards,

Ray
Raymond.Martinelli1@gmail.com

Advisor

Bill Nobles Basking Ridge, NJ

Kevin, thank you for your service. I will be happy to review your resume if you will email copy to billnobles@optonline.net.
Regards, Bill

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