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Can someone look over my resume and direct me on accentuating my qualitites?

Veteran

Jason Brownlow Armuchee, GA

I am a veteran of the USMC. I served two tours of duty and I have 5 years previous civilian law enforcement experience. I got out of policing in 2012- it wasn't ideal for a family man. I am at a company now that I love and would like to relocate with the company. With my MOS, it states I am eligible for engineering positions but my resume doesn't reflect my qualifications very well. I would be very grateful if someone can take my resume and give me pointers on how to word (or reword) it, in an effort to sound more appealing when I'm in competition with others who have degrees. Thank you and God Bless.

30 July 2015 7 replies Resumes & Cover Letters

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Advisor

Stephen Kemp Peoria, AZ

Jason, feel free to send me your resume, I would be happy to look at it. My e-mail address is Steve.kemp@peoriaaz.gov Feel free to give me any background on jobs that you are applying for.

Advisor

Stephen Kemp Peoria, AZ

Jason, feel free to send me your resume, I would be happy to look at it. My e-mail address is Steve.kemp@peoriaaz.gov Feel free to give me any background on jobs that you are applying for.

Veteran

Jason Brownlow Armuchee, GA

I've emailed my resume to everyone. Thank you again

Advisor

James Watson San Diego, CA

Hi Jason-

I am retired after a 40 year career in industry where I hired over 100 people. Now I am helping veterans like yourself by helping with their resumes. If you would e-mail me your resume (drjamesfwatson@gmail.com) I would be happy to comment on it.

Jim Watson

Advisor

Bill Moltner Dallas, TX

Hi Jason. If you'd like one more review of your resume I'd be happy to help. It sounds like you have a lot to offer, as you point out, it's all in the presentation. I'm at wjmoltner@gmail.com if I can be of assistance.

Thanks.

Bill

Advisor

Gail Baccetti Lake Geneva, WI

I would also be happy to take a look for you. gbaccetti@hotmail.com.

Advisor

Lori Kruse Pleasant Prairie, WI

Hi Jason! Thank you for your service! I would happy to look over your resume. Please send to lkruse2@its.jnj.com.

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