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Feedback on essay for business school application.

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Kenneth Cho - Advisor
- Austin, TX

I was an all-source intelligence analyst in the Army. I graduated from Columbia University with a B.A. in economics in 2010. I've worked for the...

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Kenneth Cho ⋅ Austin, TX

Would anybody willing to provide some feedback on my essay for my business school application?

Thank you.

28 December 2014 5 replies Education & Training

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Michael Wursthorn - Advisor
- New York, NY

I'm a reporter for The Wall Street Journal, covering the retail brokerage industry, including Morgan Stanley Wealth Management, Merrill Lynch, Wells Fargo Advisors and UBS...

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Michael Wursthorn ⋅ New York, NY

Plenty of other offers already, Kenneth, but I'd be more than happy to help as well. I'm a writer for The Wall Street Journal and willing to help in any way I can. Feel free to reach out to me at michael.wursthorn@wsj.com.

31 December 2014 Helpful answer

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Sarah Bates - Advisor
- Fallbrook, CA

I worked in the advertising field for over 20 years as an account executive and copywriter. I began a freelance writing career in 2001 that led to...

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Sarah Bates ⋅ Fallbrook, CA

I am a college-level English tutor and would be happy to review (and edit) your essay. Send it to me at: jsbates2@sbcglobal.net.

Sarah Bates

30 December 2014 Helpful answer

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Richard Cloud - Advisor
- Forest Lake, MN

Married, three kids, US Army Veteran, Previously owned two business, Christian, MBA (honors)

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Richard Cloud ⋅ Forest Lake, MN

I would be more than Happy to. Same information as above. You can send it to me at my personal email, rcloud1@aol.com. (I have an MBA, work for IBM).

29 December 2014 Helpful answer

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Dianne Koval - Advisor
- Highland, NY

I have been in the healthcare field as a Registered Health Information Administration (RHIA) providing support in the field of Electronic Health Records digitizing physician...

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Dianne Koval ⋅ Highland, NY

I would also be willing to review! Please let me know type of program (major, specific area of business if applicable). You can e-mail me directly at dkoval@medallies.com. Thanks! Dianne

29 December 2014 Helpful answer

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George Byrne - Advisor
- Venice, FL

I am the founder and Managing Partner of Nictom Consulting Group (Nictom). Nictom’s primary strength is helping organizations to achieve business excellence and superior...

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George Byrne ⋅ Venice, FL

Absolutely yes...what field are you trying to enter and what scholastic subject do you plan to major in? Send me an e-mail with the essay to buddyfl@verizon.net
Thanks for your service!

29 December 2014 Helpful answer

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