William Russell ⋅ Huntsville, AL Raytheon Technologies ⋅ 3 years experience

Mel,

I found this site very useful when translating my military skills into a corporate verbiage.
https://www.onetonline.org/crosswalk/MOC/

mel fontanez ⋅ Fayetteville, NC U.S. Army, Chief Warrant Officer ⋅ 28 years served

Mr. Mehta, Mr, Dest,
Thank you gentlemen, I been working as a 915E: Senior Ordnance Warrant Office supervising, monitoring and managing equipment readiness for the organization and advising the commander on status of his equipment readiness. I sincerely appreciate your advice and guidance on my transition from the Army, I love to continue working in the logistic field with Raytheon if there an opportunity available, please send an email and I will attach my resume for your feedback and guidance, thank you!

Sincerely
CW4 Fontanez, Mel E.

Jay Mehta ⋅ Aurora, OH Raytheon ⋅ 14 years experience

Mr. Fontanez, Thank you for your service. I am glad to hear that you are interested in working for Raytheon Technologies.

Are there jobs that you have shortlisted/are interested in? These jobs will list "Primary Responsibilities" and "Preferred Qualifications". I suggest you tailor your resume based on a specific job(s) requirement(s). This way, you could emphasize your experience (relate it to the "Primary Responsibilities" and "Preferred Qualifications" for the job) and show the hiring team as to "why you are a better candidate".

If you have a resume, I will be happy to review it for you.