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Magnun Silva - Veteran
- Jacksonville, FL

Self-motivated veteran with an unmatched entrepreneurial spirit. Seeking for financial advising position which will be utilizing my multilingual background and ability to build relationships.

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Magnun Silva ⋅ Jacksonville, FL

The essay is to the Masters of International Business program at the University of Florida.

Thank you.

20 August 2015 4 replies General

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Bill Moltner - Advisor
- Dallas, TX

Hello. I was born and raised in Canada, moved to the US in 1993 and spent the last seven years based in Sydney, Australia before returning...

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Bill Moltner ⋅ Dallas, TX

Hi Magnun. Looks like you have had some good offers for assistance. If you would like an additional review, please send your admissions essay to me at wjmoltner@gmail.com . I have experience in international business, have completed my MBA and, probably most importantly, I have five children whom I have helped with college admission essays. Happy to help!

Bill

23 August 2015

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Gail Baccetti - Advisor
- Lake Geneva, WI

I am retired now, but worked for 42 years. I started out in Human Resources, with an MS in Industrial Relations. I then moved into Sales,...

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Gail Baccetti ⋅ Lake Geneva, WI

I'm also happy to provide feedback. gbaccetti@hotmail.com.

21 August 2015

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Gary Gross - Advisor
- New York, NY

Currently, I manage sales teams responsible for licensing data and training to financial services firms. I am doing this for Moody's Analytics, a company that...

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Gary Gross ⋅ New York, NY

Happy to help if you would like to send it my way.

gary.gross@moodys.com

21 August 2015

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Stephen Wolff - Advisor
- Des Plaines, IL

I have a background in law and business.
I have started several companies and currently own and operate a metal service center business with several...

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Stephen Wolff ⋅ Des Plaines, IL

Please submit your essay to me for review.
Steve

20 August 2015

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