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I am a Marine Corp veteran with good work experience and would like some feed back on my resume and any advice to help me land a good career in the food service management field.

Veteran

Norberto Cortez Fort Lauderdale, FL

Here's a copy of my resume Thanks.

Profile
Motivated problem solver with five years of demonstrated ability to manage, lead, follow and serve in all aspects of the food service industry, while also being responsible for the training of subordinate personnel.
Experience
Akima Global Services 2013-2014
• Food Service Supervisor
Supervises employees engaged in serving food in a detention facility kitchen and in maintaining cleanliness of food service areas and equipment. Trains workers in performance of duties. Supervises serving of meals. Inspects kitchen and dining areas and kitchen utensils and equipment to ensure sanitary standards are met. Inspects kitchen and dining areas.
• Managed a team of 10-20 team members.
• In charge of kitchen operations.
• Maintain required records including food production, inventory, income/expense, and meal counts and personnel records.
• Maintain employee records; prepare payroll, and complete paperwork to comply with laws and regulations.
• Trained personal to use all kitchen equipment.
United States Marine Corps, Corporal 2006-2010
• Food Service Specialist, Manager, Safety Officer
Prepared and/or cooked menu items listed on the production schedule, strictly adhering to food safety procedures. Set up serving lines, garnished food items, and applied food protection and sanitation measures in field and garrison environments. Provided technical guidance to other personnel in garrison and field kitchen operations. Performed supervisory and inspection functions including shift supervision. Conducted safety training to ensure a safe working environment, and proper use of equipment. Analytical or scientific software-Gnome Gnutrition, Data base user interface and query software-Data entry software-Meals plus software, Point of sale Pos software-PCS Revenue Control Systems FASTRAK, Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint.
• Managed a team of 20 team members.
• Head Baker in charge of making sure desserts and bread were prepared in a timely manner.
• In charge of profit and loss statement’s and placing orders.
• In charge of food safety and sanitation training.
Education
Broward College, Davie, FL
A.A. IN HOSPITALITY MANAGEMENT/CRIMINAL JUSTICE 2012
U.S. Army Quartermaster Food Service School, Fort Lee, VA 2006

Certification

Art Institute of Ft. Lauderdale
Food Safety Manager Certification 2014
ServSafe-Food Protection Manager 2014

Personal Skills
CPR Certified, Capable problem solver, Budget planning, Resource management, Windows proficiency, Mac proficiency, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft PowerPoint.

7 November 2014 9 replies Resumes & Cover Letters

Answers

Advisor

Stephen Kemp Peoria, AZ

Thanks for your service, your resume does not get you the job, it gets you further consideration, as someone who reviews many resumes in making hiring decisions, I would suggest the following: 1. Your resume should never be longer than two pages. Use Large print and bold for the headings. 2. I recommend not including the references on the resume, but indicating that they are available and you can provide them on a separate sheet. 3. I also recommend using a good stock, non white paper, so that it doesn't get lost. 4. Use a font like Arial that scans easily. More and more employers are doing hiring electronically and information is being scanned, also, don't try and cram too much information on the resume so it does not scan well. 5. Your resume needs to tell a person, why should you consider me for an interview.
Finally, read up on interview skills--I have interviewed many people, whose resume's looked great, but were a complete disaster on interviewing.

Advisor

Frank Tripi Duxbury, MA

Norberto,
I didn't notice any statement at the start of what you want to do - you might want to describe the type of company you want to work for and your objectives and goals. You can lead with something like: Executive Summary or "Seeking a position" etc.

Advisor

Brian Fox Voorhees, NJ

Norberto,

I'm glad to see that several people (including people with more resume expertise than myself) have responded, so I'll just mention one thing: I would change the tense on my last job to indicate that it's what I'm currently doing (or just completed doing immediately before retirement). For example:

Akima Global Services 2013-2014
• Food Service Supervisor
Supervising employees engaged in serving food in a detention facility kitchen and in maintaining cleanliness of food service areas and equipment. Training workers in performance of duties. Supervising serving of meals. Inspecting kitchen and dining areas and kitchen utensils and equipment to ensure sanitary standards are met. Inspecting kitchen and dining areas.
• Managing a team of 10-20 team members.
• In charge of kitchen operations.
• Maintaining required records including food production, inventory, income/expense, and meal counts and personnel records.
• Maintaining employee records; prepare payroll, and complete paperwork to comply with laws and regulations.
• Training personal to use all kitchen equipment.

Brian Fox

Advisor

Kelly Williams Newark, DE

Norberto,

We provide free resume critiques to all military service members. You can submit your resume to us via email or by using our secure online submission form:

Email: Info@ExpertResumeSolutions.com
Form: http://www.tinyurl.com/ERS-Critique

Feel free to also connect with me on LinkedIn: www.linkedin.com/in/kellywilliamsmaresca/

Thank you for your service. We are here to help!

Warmest Regards,
Kelly Williams
Resume Strategist & President
Expert Resume Solutions
Business: (732) 686-6455
www.ExpertResumeSolutions.com

Advisor

Alicia Rasley Indianapolis, IN

Hi, Norberto! I'm an English teacher, so I scanned for typos. Here's one:
• In charge of profit and loss statements and placing orders.

(No apostrophe in "statements" because it is just a plural-- more than one statement).

I'm not much help with resumes, but that did jump out at me! Best of luck! You have great credentials.

Advisor

Keith Wiggins Ocala, FL

Norberto, please email me at wiggins_keith@yahoo.com and I will get you going in the right direction with the resume and more if you need.

Veteran

Norberto Cortez Fort Lauderdale, FL

Thank you guys for giving feedback and sharing your knowledge. Its awesome that there are people out there willing to help out veterans.

Advisor

Wayne Greenleaf San Clemente, CA

Looks great, though can't see the actual layout. Clearly you have received some guidance - bullets, concise. One page best if you can do it.

Advisor

Kayla Strupp Schaumburg, IL

Hello Norberto,

I'd be happy to take a look at your resume. Feel free to send me a message so I can provide some direct feedback.

Thank you for your service.

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