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What can I do to improve my resume?

Veteran

Magnun Silva Jacksonville, FL

I am working on applying for a position with Edward Jones as a financial advisor. It would be great if I could get feedback on what I can do to make my resume more competitive.

http://www.slideshare.net/MagnunSilva1/magnun-silva-resume-1-50905633

24 July 2015 4 replies Military to Civilian Transition

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Advisor

Kit Lancaster Chicago, IL

Magnun,

I'm happy to give you marketing / communication and resume feedback for the financial services industry. There are many great firms to consider working with to start a career as a financial advisor. Outside of Edward Jones, what other firms are you targeting / applying?

Thank You,
Kit

Advisor

Jessica Desrochers Groveland, MA

Hi Magnun,

If you would like additional feedback, send me your resume in WORD and I'd be happy to review and provide suggestions. If you could include a link to the job you're interested in that'd be great also.
Send to jessica.desrochers@chesterton.com

Veteran

Magnun Silva Jacksonville, FL

That would be great! I am sending it to you right now.
Thank you!

Advisor

Jim Schreier Milwaukee, WI

If you sent me your resume (to ACP or to info@212-careers.com) in a Word (or text) format I will be happy to critique it and suggest improvements. Unfortunately, your resume is not doing the best it could do in portraying your strengths and accomplishments.

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