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Is there anyone available to critique my resume?

Veteran

Luis Gonzales El Paso, TX

Hello, I am about to separate from active service after serving nine years in the Marine Corps. I was wondering if anyone critique my resume? I'm interested in a management or supervisory position after I separate. Thank you.

17 May 2012 10 replies Military to Civilian Transition

Answers

Advisor

Jerry Chlopek Saint Johns, FL

Luis,

If you are still needing other reviews, please feel free to send me your email. jerry.chlopek@ge.com

Best regards,
Jerry

4 February 2013 Helpful answer

Advisor

Richard Buck Patterson, NY

Good evening. My name is Richard Buck, a Marine Corp vet. If you still need someone to review your resume, I would be happy to review it and help you.

Richard Buck
76warrior85@gmail.com
914 391 3375

Advisor

Logan Sankaran Plano, TX

If you are still looking for some additional help, I will be happy to review and offer suggestions for improvements. Please email your resume to: logan.sankaran@hp.com.
Good-luck.
Logan

Veteran

h m Charlotte, NC

Luis,

There are many organizations willing and able to provide you assistance. Here's a link that will provide some career tools and help with your resume. You can call or email them and get a career coach. http://vaforvets.va.gov/veterans/aboutva/hiringevents/Pages/Veteran-Registration.aspx [link no longer working]

They helped me with my federal resume. Good luck.

regards,

Greg Baltmiskis

Advisor

Judy Tomlinson Dallas, TX

Send it to me and I will take a look. tomlinsonjk@aol.com
Judy Tomlinson

Advisor

William Koch Huntsville, AL

Luis, check out our website stillservingveterans.org we are a non-profit helping veterans transition. We can help you regardless of where you are located. We will do resume critique and advise you on job search strategies. Also, we have a pretty good network of employers looking to hire veterans. We have a professional counselor that is here to assist you. Semper Fi.

Advisor

Patrick Hernandez Dallas, TX

I'll take a look at it. patrick.hernandez1@us.army.mil

Veteran

Luis Gonzales El Paso, TX

Gentlemen, thank you for helping me out. I will email my resume to the addresses given. This is going to be a big transition for me. The Marine Corps is the only thing I've known since I graduated high school. I have no prior civilian workforce experience. Hopefully the resume I put together helps me.

Semper Fidelis,
Luis

Advisor

Scott Goodman Waxhaw, NC

I would very much like to look over your resume. If you would like forward to scott.goodman@siemens.com

Semper Fi

Advisor

Robert Buchanan Hensley, AR

Luis,

Thank you for serving!

I will critique your resume if you would like. You can send it to me at buck.buchanan@urs.com

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