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General Resume Help?


Jonathan Quintyne Apo, AP

Is anyone able to look over my resume and provide some advice on where it can be improved? I am transitioning into the civilian logistics sector and looking for some tips on how to make it as appealing as possible.

If you are able to help, send your email address and I'll shoot the resume direct to you. Thank you!

6 October 2020 5 replies Resumes & Cover Letters



cathy salerno Chester, NJ

Hi Jonathan, i see you’ve had several responses but if you would like another set of eyes on your resume I’d be happy to help. I’ve helped other members of this forum translate military experience into private sector language.
Best regards,


Joy Montgomery Pleasanton, CA

Join and network starting there.


Sheila McCormick Oakland, CA

Hi Jonathan. Happy to comment on your resume, I have done that for several others on ACP. Just send a word document to


Jeff Martin Ashburn, VA

I’d suggest that you network at the target company or industry. Use LinkedIn to find people already working there and reach out to them. Ask them the process they used to get hired and ask them to help you navigate the hiring process and if they are willing, ask them to submit you as a referral. These activities require much more time on your part but in my opinion would greatly increase your chances for success. Good luck!


Duke Khadan Sawh Keyport, NJ

Hi Jonathan,

I will be happy to review your resume and provide any necessary guidance. Also identify the specific area of logistics, in which you will be looking.

Send resume to:


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