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I am looking for someone to review my resume

Veteran

Steven Harrold Fort Collins, CO

First off, thank you to all the mentors who volunteer their time with ACP, it is greatly appreciated. I am looking for assistance reviewing my resume. Please let me know if anyone can help me out. Thank you - Steve

14 May 2020 22 replies Resumes & Cover Letters

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Advisor

Victoria Heck Ashburn, VA

Hi Steven, I'm a military spouse, and Recruiter. Please send your resume to: victoria.heck@parsons.com and I'd be happy to review and provide feedback. Also, If you see any Parsons jobs of interest, let me know and I can find out who the recruiter is. www.parsons.com/careers .

21 May 2020 Helpful answer

Advisor

Dennis Haynes Chicago, IL

Hi Steve , I am a Certified Career Coach, who would happy to Pro-Bono review and provide you constructive feedback on your resume. To contact me you have two options. The 1st and most preferable option would be submit your resume as an attachment via my LinkedIn profile at www.linked.com/in/dennishaynesphr. I would like a Word version that is editable also, I could also provide you feedback on your LinkedIn profile. In my professional opinion they work in tandem. Your second option is send it via email to my email address at haynesenterprises60619@yahoo.com Also my LinkedIn profile would also give you an opportunity to review my background. I am confident I can help you.

15 May 2020 Helpful answer

Advisor

Ashutosh Mehta Edison, NJ

Thank you for your service Steven. While you are already having good feedbacks, I would suggest visiting resumegenius.com which is a paid site but offers varieties of resume templates, as well help on resume content (i.e. full sentences) based on your skills.

Advisor

Andrew Willie Halls, TN

My advice to you: Write 10% less skills on your resume than it actually is.

Advisor

Christopher Dilley Jacksonville, FL

Steven,

Would be happy to review it for you. Cdilley@its.jnj.com. Not the best time to be looking for a position. My employer has basically frozen any hirings right not due to Covid

Advisor

ROY VALE San Antonio, TX

Steve, please send me your resume by email at rvale@farmersagent.com and I can do my best to give you my feedback. Thank you again for your service! Roy Vale, District Manager with the Farmers Insurance Group - San Antonio, Texas --

Advisor

Jerry Welsh Middleville, MI

Steven,
In reviewing your LinkedIn profile I notice you are very skilled at a number of things. What is your chosen career? The profile is to network and have folks request your resume. Need to narrow in on a career and then you resume should be tailored to the position you are applying for. A general resume is ok for a job fair, but not a good thing to hang out for public review. Maybe these two articles might help. Thank you for your support and sacrifices. God Bless https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/come-prepared-transition-process-gap-between-civilian-jerry-welsh/
https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/when-more-right-jerry-welsh/

Advisor

James Oldenburg Aurora, CO

Steven,

Another USAF(R) here in the front range. Please feel free to reach out on LinkedIn if I can be of assistance.

Cheers,

Advisor

Joy Montgomery Pleasanton, CA

If you want feedback, you can send your Word doc to my website which has a roadmap that you can use. www,ReBootCamp.US

Advisor

Kevin Kuker Whitehouse Station, NJ

If you are looking for a position in Project Management I would be willing to take a look. kkuker@comcast.net. I was the hiring manager for the Corporate Project Management Office for Educational Testing Service in Princeton NJ (we develop a few tests you may have heard of - SAT, PSAT, GRE, etc).

Advisor

Jose Roman Norfolk, VA

Congrats,

Let me know if you have any questions at all. You can shoot your resume to: Jroman@regent.edu

All the Best,
Jose R

Advisor

Spencer Haligas Lisle, IL

Spence60532@gmail.com

I'd love to review it Steve

Spence

Veteran

Steven Harrold Fort Collins, CO

Thank you all for the outpouring of support. Wow! I think I've got a copy to everyone that reached out with an email address. Again, I appreciate all the help! - Steve

Advisor

Tom Adam El Segundo, CA

I've been a corporate recruiter since the mid-1990's, and I'm more than happy to review your resume. I've been doing a lot of this lately. I may be a life-long civilian, but my father did 28 years in the Air Force, and I have friends and colleagues from pretty much every branch of the service. You can send your resume to either my company email (tom.adam@rtx.com), or my personal email (tadam2000@mail.com)

-- Tom

Advisor

Lex Levin Northborough, MA

Happy to help you. I'm a full-time professional resume writer and a former Fed specializing for the last 11 years in working with Active Duty and Reserve Service Members, Veterans, and Military Spouses transitioning to Federal or private sector work. I don't use templates and do all the work myself. You can best get in touch with me through my website contact page:

https://lexlevinllc.com/contact/.

Advisor

Wayne Brinkman Dallas, TX

Howdy Steven: Having worked with ACP and other non-profit organizations involving a need for resume reviews, enhancements and efforts, I will be happy to review your resume and provide any constructive and instructive feedback. Thank you for your service and please feel free to email me. I will send my email address to you by direct contact via ACP. Thanks.

Advisor

Tom Hayashi Arlington, VA

Hello Col. Harrold:

I would be pleased to review your resume. If you have a job announcement that you are aligning your resume to, please also provide it. If there is a particular deadline for my review, please share that date with me so I can meet your expectations.

Lastly, you may send your resume as an attachment in Word doc to:

thayashi1@saybrook.edu

Tom Hayashi, MS Ed, PhD

Advisor

Tom Hayashi Arlington, VA

Hello Col. Harrold:

I would be pleased to review your resume. If you have a job announcement that you are aligning your resume to, please also provide it. If there is a particular deadline for my review, please share that date with me so I can meet your expectations.

Lastly, you may send your resume as an attachment in Word doc to:

thayashi1@saybrook.edu

Tom Hayashi, MS Ed, PhD

Advisor

Steven Sablan Carmel, CA

Hi Steven, I’m a retired Marine officer who made the transition three years ago. I’d be happy to review your resume and provide some pointers. You can send it to me at steven.a.sablan@gmail.com if you’d like me to look it over.

Advisor

Gail Baccetti Lake Geneva, WI

Steven, I would be happy to review your resume. Please forward it as a Word Document to gbaccetti@hotmail.com.

Veteran

Steven Harrold Fort Collins, CO

Thanks Jeff!

How do I deliver my resume to you? I don't see a way to attach anything to this thread.

Advisor

Jeff Martin Ashburn, VA

While I’m not an expert I would be happy to review your resume and offer any suggestions or ideas that I think would help you. If you send me your resume please also tell me what your target job or target industry is and what your short term goals are. That might help me provide feedback. Jeff

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