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Travis Votaw Fort Leavenworth, KS

Having had only one other person look over my resume, I am hoping to find someone - or a reliable service - to show me where my resume is lacking or needs improvement. Any advice is greatly appreciated, thank you.


1 April 2019 4 replies Resumes & Cover Letters



Maddie Coffin New York, NY

Hi Travis,

Thank you for your service and for your question! For resume feedback, I would encourage you to utilize our Community page to search for and reach out to Advisors based on industry and location through direct messaging to ask for another set of eyes on your resume.

In addition, if you are currently in an ACP mentorship, don’t be afraid to ask your Mentor for his or her feedback! You can also ask your Mentor to share your resume with their network for additional advice for improvement.

Best of luck to you!


2 April 2019 Helpful answer


Amit Chaudhary Cupertino, CA

Though better, if you are looking at Technology career, can look for many white collar roles
Let me know if you would still like a review, put it on google drive and private message me the link.


Travis Votaw Fort Leavenworth, KS

Ms. Coffin, I appreciate your insight and have looked into the community tab and found a local advisor - thank you, ma'am!


James OBrien Williamsburg, VA

Travis I would be happy to review your resume. I have more than 30 years experience in a variety of industries and can help you cross over from military to civilian terminology that gives you a better chance of entering the workforce. Some of the key questions to be prepared for include what is your career goal, type of job, location desired and how best to match your extensive experience in a way that makes you very attractive to potential employers.
Thank you for your service and please let me know if you would like me to review your resume.

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