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Resume review/critique


Michael Cumbie Atlanta, GA

Since transitioning from the Army in 2015 I have been working as a project manager for a healthcare IT company completing hospital electronic medical record / revenue cycle management implementations. This has been a great experience and a great transition to the civilian workforce but I am now looking for a new position and was hoping to receive any advice/critique on my updated resume and Linkedin profile.

I am seeking a project management/implementation position, but not necessarily in healthcare.

Any help is appreciated!

10 November 2018 6 replies Resumes & Cover Letters



Anqi Zhao Hakalau, HI

Hi Michael,

I recommend you sign up for a membership with MOAA. They have tons of career related services include resume review and career counseling. They also have other membership benefits like group insurance that's worth way more than the $40 annual membership fee.

Good luck.



Stefan Beyer Kirkland, WA

I can review your resume if you still need someone to look at it.


Katiuska (Katy) Carrillo Plainville, CT

My name is Katy Carrillo and I have a 18 year experience in IT roles in a global company.
I would love to give you my feedback if you are interested in IT based critique.

my contact
Katy Carrillo


Andy Bergin Greenwich, CT

Michael - please contact me at and I can take a look. You have an impressive background and a good story to tell. I'd love to help.
Andy Bergin


Steven Mathews Spring, TX

I have a free process to transform your resume into a Top 1% Resume. People who have diligently applied the principles historically obtained new and better positions in 2-4 weeks back when jobs were almost none existent.


xxxx xxxx San Antonio, TX


MY name is Richard Buck, I am a USMC Veteran with over 20 years business experience. It would be my honored to review and critique your resume for you.

Below is my contact information

Richard Buck
914 391 3375

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