Jerry Welsh ⋅ Middleville, MI Master Military Transition Advisor/HPS GPO ⋅ 30 years experience

You might want to review this article. Keep in mind the sole purpose of a LI profile is to have them request your resume, which you then target to the position they have asked you to send it for. If it means requesting the job description or the posting, this will help greatly. Too much is actually worse, than too little. But what is there needs to be in the language of the civilian career. "Keywords" Thanks for your service and God Bless. https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/when-more-right-jerry-welsh/

William Ryan ⋅ New York, NY Circulation ⋅ 27 years experience

It looks pretty solid. Good job. Thank you for your service.

David Limato ⋅ Fremont, CA Hewlett Packard ⋅ 15 years experience

Hi Scott. Feel free to reach out to me on Linked In. Would be glad to provide feedback.
Thank you for your service!
Dave

ACP AdvisorNet Staff ⋅ New York, NY ⋅ 10 years experience

Hi Scott,

Thank you for your service and for using ACP AdvisorNet!

A few other service members have asked similar questions and received many responses. I have copied below the links to their posts so you can review what Advisors have previously said:
https://acp-advisornet.org/questions/2107
https://acp-advisornet.org/questions/2997
https://acp-advisornet.org/questions/2168

Additionally, we recommend the following great resources to the participants in our formal mentorship program all the time. They provide quick and easy tips for boosting your LinkedIn and online branding presence. The last one has good advice, but also provides links to many more excellent resources:
Personal Branding 101: https://idealistcareers.org/personal-branding-101/
23 Quick and Easy LinkedIn Updates to Get Hired Now: https://skillcrush.com/2016/05/03/linkedin-updates/
How Veterans Can Make the Most out of LinkedIn from LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/how-veterans-can-make-most-out-linkedin-daniel-savage/?trackingId=sf1%2FfGDHacL1JLTbwd9a3w%3D%3D

I hope this is helpful!

All the best,

Sarah
ACP AdvisorNet Staff